Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Query Letter, Version 4.0

OK, so I redid it -- again. Put back a little of the mystery I'd taken out before, threw in a couple of new elements, tried to put a bit more conflict in there... Oh, who the fuck knows if this is better or not? I sure as hell don't.

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  1. Not yet, Tina. I'm dithering about who I might send it to (I mean, to whom I might send it). I'd like to send a couple of e-queries to test Version 4.0, but if it takes 8 weeks to get the reply...well, you see the flaw in that plan. So I'm going to try to see if there are any agents I haven't queried yet who have a reputation for answering e-queries quickly...

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  2. Update, Tina: I just fired off an e-query to an agent who has a reputation for pretty much instantaneous responses (to e-mails, at least)...

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  3. Hee hee hee! Although it's not funny at all...

    What I mean is: I know where you're at, Travener... been there....I'm mean, still there...

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